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 title = "Charcoalization"
-description = ""
+description = "Have you ever wondered what certain things look like after everything was removed from them, aside from carbon? Well, do I have a project for you"
 date = 2024-06-18
 
 [taxonomies]
 tags = ["charcoal", "crafty"]
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-So for no apparent reason I one day decided 
+So, for no apparent reason, I one day decided it would be interesting to start seeing what different organic objects would look like charcoalized. Here is a collection of ones which turned out interesting.
 
-{{image(src="images/charcoal/onion.jpg", caption="")}}
-{{image(src="images/charcoal/apple.jpg", caption="")}}
+{{image(src="images/charcoal/onion.jpg", caption="A charcoalized onion with the layers clearly defined")}}
+{{image(src="images/charcoal/apple.jpg", caption="Charcoalized apple showing a clear silhouette and shape of an apple but with blistered and flaking skin")}}
 
 I think the garlic was my favourite of all. Though the structure did not hold up well at all, the cloves inside developed this iridescent colour akin to an oil spill or oxidation on metals 
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 {{image(src="images/charcoal/garlic.jpg", caption="a lump of black material loosely resembling garlic with brilliant sections of blue, purple, and gold")}}
 
 
 bucket list of items I want to charcoalize
 
 - Corn
+- Cabbage
+- Strawberry
+- Pumpkin